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Old 02-01-04, 02:29 PM   #32
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Weak battle by both, to start of with.
Both came with sometimes blameworthy punchlines..
Work on that, & Daz i know you can do better, so please do.
Dont let me read that horrible shit again.
But on with the battle.
Not very one-sided as i expected..saviour came ok..
But no more then just ok.. needs to definately elevate.
You got the basics down..but thats nothing yet..
Browse through the triple L to see how wit & comedy can be very usefull.
Also try to get more creative & just put some more effort in to it.
Dazasta..still takes this pretty easily.
Better punches..the structure was a little crooked but it didnt bother the flow.
Another herb win i'd say.. you need to definately take ur ass to elevated frontlines.
But the overall picture is,
That Dazasta takes this with more creativity & better punches.
vote Dazasta