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Old 02-01-04, 03:32 PM   #25
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ite official...your structure was wak man,
which made your verse a bore to read...try structure it
better read sum elavated battles and see how they are done,
also your punches seemed forced to me man..they were ok but,
it was just real forced cus of your wordplay they were werded wrng man,
007-nice verse man...better from you you had a few tite punches in there,
also had a nice structure man..youre elavateing niuce shit..work on personals.


plz hit this up na http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109550 thx alot..........pz