--[Flow]---
Flow was aight, but i felt that it was maybe a little to simplistic in places like it needed to be expanded ya know, but it flowed well & the structure was dope.

"My actions depicted as evil and I regret my vengenance
Repentance? I put my conscience through death sentence" - thought that was nice.

--[Vocab]--
Liked the vocab, you used a well balenced dosage. Felt in some places that it could have been more complex only goin' by what i'd consider your normal standards, ya know...but on a whole it was dope.

--[Concept]--
Original, you executed it well, a nice "short story", you really brought us into the womens reality & made us experiance her feelin's & emotions. Started off sorta teary n' vulnerable n' turned to anger towards the end...ending was nice too..

--[Overall]--
Thought it was a well constructed short piece...flow was dope but i felt that it was a little simplistic at times, only compared to what i've seen you do before, but the emotion was there...3/5.



If you have time:Behind the Words