Breakdown

Bombz
Yo..yo. :K:takes so much time, his pace can decay these bones,
Dawg, its time to pay your wage, so often like pre-paid phones,

mmmm... okay......

Allow me to cave in his rib-cage so all beef is deciest and gone,
Fitted with flow you cant say I'm sick cuz 'ill' has been worn,
My type of begining'll make ya' regret ya' fucking skillz were born,

explain this to me, makes no sense

Chills ya as I'm 'cummin', this 'fillin' wouldn't hesistate to killa cop,
Grill ya' until you get hot, you work a pogo stick n' think ya hip-hop,

a little hmmm but last line was dope

But stop and think 'frozen' son, These threads I'm steady closing em',
He got picked to batle me and niggah thinks he's the chosen one,

wordplay's good, last line nice didnt understand frozen mind thing though.....

Blowing blunts n' lost em, his life has cost em, as death will cross him,
Fa' eva comin, I lost him, stop me? He must think he's a Trojan condomn,

stretched, first line had nice muliti, last line didnt rhyme wid 1st

Bombed him, stomped him, for 5 wins has harmed him,
Luck couldn't help, if 'WB's' whiches came and 'charmed' him....
good closer, original

.:K:.
Fucka Bomb bitch...cause im sure thats the only thing your dropping,
i can tell your shit was done in a rush..simular to christmas shopping,

nice opener, fire

bombz is simular to carpet..the way hes getting floored,
K could walk into the red light district..and still wudn't get whored,

okay, but sounds a lil stretched, bad structure

already merked you twice...so this is just another one to my list,
your like a blind felidermite boxing..all your punches mist,

nice punch.....keep em comin

i no this is a game of chance like poker..but ill still smash this joker(sig),
what im tripping on is how bombz is a herb..but still k is doper?,

umm, i think this was filler, nothin nice!

6-lines 8-lines 10? dawg it really don't matter,
bombz is just another fish on a plate...enterd the chipy..
......just about to get batterd...........................

not bad......


Wordplay: Bombz
Punches: .:K:.
Meta’s: .:K:.
Creativity: Tie
Personals: .:K:.
Flow: .:K:.
Multi’s: Bombz
Strucutre: Bombz

Vote: .:K:.


plees return the favor, my battles r super slept on!!
links r in my sig............