Good shit here...Very good flow in this piece, as well as excellent vocab...I liked the subject you portrayed and all your bars had unity and coherence, unlike most of these Open Mic'ers...what more can I say? 7.5/10...Your one of my favorite Open Mic'ers.
Please return the favour...mine is getting slept on.
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