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Old 02-01-04, 04:54 PM   #13
Meters
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My vote goes to West for consistency and not falling off from beginning to end like Proof did. Nice structure man, kept your punches compact and they hit well. Proof, lose the / after your lines and try to think of more complex disses, you need to use wit rather than sheer force in battles. Telling him he still believes in Santa Clause is not a good punch. For that matter, i wouldn't reccomend telling him that he still believes in the Easter Bunny either. You have to hit where it hurts, his pic, his avy, his existence altogether. Can't waste your time about which fictional holiday characters he believes in. Good luck elevating, vote goes to West.
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