Well...as you mentioned, this doesnt needa be critiqued...but I will anyways; its being slept on(rightfully so)
Your flow was ok, in some areas, you ruined the flow...vocab was average and your topic was corny. But then again, I cant relate to it, Im a male. Your multies werent exceptional in any means..though i liked some of your metaphors, along with your wordplay. Overall a 6/10 because i couldnt relate to it.
Please return the favour, mine is also getting slept on.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...637#post1147637