This kid's a herb, just by reading all of his verses you see..
a bunch of filler with capitalization, i think you deserve everyone an apology
nope
Thats right, you wasted our time, everyone expected something tough,
and i'd give you some helpful tips but im afraid 10 lines just wont be enough!
lol, nice
Emerge formed a crew thats all about compassion and gay pride,
and 'merge decided to join two crews, because of all the dicks he could ride!
nope
His talents a piece of trash, like a condom gone wrong..
and the only thing 'merge killed was the paper he wrote his verse on!
this got a slight smile...nice
If every man hes been with turned straight i'd bet he'd yell out "please take my life"..
and i dont keep my punches family related because he covers that in his sex life!
I know what it meant...I wasn't really feeing it
About 2 nice punches out of 5. Wasnt feeling some of the punches. It ws ok, but could have been better, with harder punches.
I often wonder where my wackness went that was built up inside
I deride.....
but with a sense of happiness...i found it deeply instilled in derive!
eehhh, could have been better
You homo. . .sex punches are a no-no damn...I thought you knew
Fuck beating you black & blue...
....ama punch you in & out every single hue!
lol, nice one
And this foo is isn't only a biter. ..he also chews and swallows too
Laughed when he said,...
....... "Even if i was Jill I wouldn't be jack shit next to you"
slight smile...it was ok
You personify ceramic....shit even with this filler i got you glazed
WOW. . .your home page was dope...till you named it purple haze
blah
You had no chance after all you still quote, edit, and explain bars
blah blah blah blah blah blah.....
^^^^considered quoteable when put next to your shit by far
ok
This verse had a few decent lines. Could have hit harder on a couple concepts, but it was ok.
Overall Emerge had a better read top to bottom, than derive. This was close, but Emerge clearly had more decent lines. Neither came with personals that were real ill, so on pure readability, and punches, Emerge gets my vote.
Vote: Emerge
Please drop an honest vote here:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341
Edit:
Sorry but the polls says I need 500 posts to vote...
I'm about 200 posts shy..
Anyway, good luck on getting voting in this...
-W1