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Old 02-01-04, 06:16 PM   #12
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i liked this piece, really felt the emotion.
vocab was good, told a nice little story,
little on the short side, but sometimes that for the best.
flow was decent but it did feel like you worded it to fit a nice structure,
look at some of the dopest topical heads,
the structure is not the most important part of the piece,
much more important is content, emotion, wording,
overall nice drop, keep em commin
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