Battle goes to Menolin, even if some of his concepts were kind of played. He still found a way to word them in the right way to where everything is a punch. No real filler in that verse, everything used to attack his opponent. I liked the part about opportunity knocking him out, thought that was nice. Se7en, you're concepts were also kind of played but didn't benefit from the wording and punching skills that Menolin thrived in. You could see how those 1000 plus posts of Menolin's belong there in that this was a very experienced vs. not experienced kind of battle. As far as punches, personals, flow, and even structure which both were alright with goes, Menolin gets my vote.
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