Your greatest punches were ..erased.. while the rest-were-irrelevant
You'll never elevate like your "skills caught up with the law", just "arrested development"
This pest-aint-intelligent but I'll still maim and dangle-this-nerd
A tangle-with-Verb? I should be "stepping in flower beds" the way I "trample-this-herb"
This tramp-is-absurd, I "get under your skin" to the point I could "dance-with-your-nerves"
Im invading the "corners of your mind", you feel my "hands-on-the-curb"?
In case you don’t figure-in-time I’ll let you know the kid-is-divine
Serve you like “Baby Backs” at “Chili’s” when I dangle your “rib”-in-your-“spine”
You so “gassed” that if you smelled smoke, then most likely your ass might-be-”burning”
Meters “wrapping hair” (rapping here) puts more people to “sleep” than an Afghans’ “nightly-Turban”
Only way you’d ever have “nerves of steel” is with the “shank-through-ya-skin”
I’m taking all categories for voters but at least in boredom-you’ll-win.....
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Weak closer, very nice opener, good consistent wordplay, but the multis were sketchy, sorta messed up midway with your multis. Punches were alright, but excelled with wordplay. Used a bit of filler.


Stepping to me launches you in the air…an crushes ya flat
Took your advice and looked up……….
…………..……..so I could see what ya sig’s laughing at!
Wanted in on this battle...couldn’t have been more wrong
Because you’re out of the woods when I beat you…….
…………...back to the cunt reside in which you belong!
I stepped into this battle vicious..ready to win at all costs
What a surprise it was for me……….
……………………………when at any rate, you lost!
Trying to hang with me…you’re one of the week I ditch
Woke up to check the calendar……
…………………….................and then I sunday bitch!
Two of my verses should be posted..make it even lyrically
Because you’d have to bite my entire verse…..
………………………………….to get a taste of victory!
I merked you in this battle…but who really won is blurred
Because I have to hear this bitch squeal…
…………….……..….after I made him a broken record!
Running with IJL……and you can’t even step to them
Ya only in that wack crew……
……………….’cuz you couldn’t beat so joined ‘em!
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Good punches, ill personals. The 'looking up' line was real nice. Set up lines with the flow wastes a lot of space though. Punches were more effective than Virt's, but no multis. Flip some multis next time. Good opener, good closer. Slightly better than Virt's
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Vote - Meters

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