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Old 02-01-04, 08:32 PM   #8
EyI-SyTeZ
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Wise's Verse,
..Aight yo Telekinetic..
I make you extinct..kinda like flags that were Confederit
Jacked ya MC(mastercard)..basically I'm taking ya credit
Stretched and Kinda Wack

..Introduced you to death..you met it.. and shook hands
You a Herb..& my intentions to roast you..like cook plans
Nice Wordplay

T..my winds enter ya ear..so my spits just blow ya mind
U ain't Telekinetic..I'll silence ya brain..Tele's justa mime
Pretty Nice

Non-intelligent..
MC can't compare with smarts, cuz u'll never be sqaured
Even with gentle hands I handle u..& still you get teared
Umm, Wack

..Acting hard..trying to discuss this..but you can't kill me
.Charged with wack..even poetic justice found you guilty
Nice

Can't touch mine..squeezed my fucking lines..
.....................................And still couldn't bust rhymes
Ain't that funny..Koed ya ass..
........................without using a muthafucking punchline
Closer Could've Been better


T's Verse,
Wisdom has never graced your presence or enlightened wise ways
This guys claims he's hit wits end, but in what..............an Escalade?
Wack

No way this guys style is first-class damn you aint even good quality
If all the first-rate contenders gathered together you'd sit alone solemnly
Nice Lines

I stay bombin he, or him whatever you want to call it "a crock of shit"
Stir your best rhymes that you got in a pot... and that's what you'll get
Decent

Just quit a couple years an acquire some skill not more dope on the streets
I manipulate the ABC's to murder emcees with much ease now rest in peace
Nice Wordplay

You speak about wisdom under ya name but ya ignorant the equal of the rest
If wack was a crime confess there'd be a sequel to........ "you are under arrest"
Nice

Without a gun an a vest I slaughter an kill its time for you to father your will
Cause while I assassinate the beat.........you got nothin more than time to kill
OK Closer

Vote: Telekinetic
This was a pretty even battle, both emcees had pretty decent verses. I gave telekinetic the vote because of his nice wordplay, multis, and his ok punchlines. Wise Ways, you should've came a little harder.


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