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Old 02-01-04, 09:09 PM   #12
Ambitious
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liked this battle........but definitley could have been better from both!.....

wise ways: perfect structure....great flow....hard hitting punches....nice personals....metas and word play were great.......a very witty Verse....

tele: stretched bars...a little bit ...good flow...good punches...personals were *attempted* but decent try....metas were nice....wordplay...eh....
i'm going wit WW cuz his punches hit harder and were more direct......

best lines ....
ww - the closer was nasty....
tele : i guess the closer.....too concentrated on multies....and rhyming....should have thwon better punches...that is why u lost
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