hmmm....
Weezy..ur verse was pretty weak for the most part...rhymes werent' very good but they were better than some of the trash I've seen in the Front lines...you're nameplay was decent...although u kept on and on about fish and it really got pretty annoying...ur structure wasn't all that great either...the only thing I really liked about urs was the flow, which for the most part stayed pretty good..
Gillz...fix ur structure...and shorten ur bars...the mismatched bars really fucked up the flow on some lines...but u had a few decent lines on him...the MTV line was played as hell...the Antartica line was iight, cuz it rhymed nicely..u have good rhymes, and u put a little depth into some of ur punches (using people's names that aren't an everyday figure on TV for most people), but that can also cause problems...u won this simply by having a more complex and advanced looking verse but u have a lot to work on....
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