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Originally Posted by ILLunatic
Newbie'ish...
Structure was hella fucked up
Flow was ok..
Hard to read due to structure fuck up..
Straight i guess.. Elevate tho
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YA right, how is the Structure fucked up?
rappers is bullshittin... THa Game Is all Talk/
singin w/ hoes jus’ To put Ya Name in The Charts/
This shit’s Goin downhill, Like Tha Shape of an Arc/
We fena Silence Tha Followers Fakein tha Art/
this rap shit Runs through my Veins to my Heart/
I’m a Street Warrior, That Was Destined To Die/
Tryin to Survive walkin’ under desolate skies/
Where Legions of men hide w/ tha Devils Demise/
In a shepherds disguise, crooked Revrins of Christ/
Getting Lost in Thoughts in tha Depth of my mind/
Thinkin Hip Hop’s Aproachin tha end of it’s life/
Is Enough To Make walk around Depressed for a night/
I LOVE THIS SHIT, I neva been spitin-fa-No-Money/
If tha planet got nuked I be walkin through a dessert/
Spittin-to-nobody, Me and Explicit Rippin tha Top Pros/
Spittin Punches on mixTapes that’ll Dent in Ya Consoles/
w/ flows, that extend past tha End Of Tha Cosmos/
Why yall Paid? ‘n I get Shit on for Hot Flows?/
IT’s Enough to make me flip n Rip out ya Tonsils/
Cause It’s Easy To Rap, When U Media Backed/
but I’m ‘Bout Blunts, Bitches, Graffiti n Rap/
Cats like us’ Handin yall The Encyclopedia back/
ya cheesy n wack, needin to develop ya mind/
wasan't shit byt a passin trend to spit Intelligent Rhymes!?!/
Now tha Real Shit Can’t shine on tha shelf w/ tha ice/
Get so deep, I look up, N it looks like Hell in the skies/
I’m Half Dragon Half Lion w/ tha Face of a Minotaur/
Spitin enigmatic text engraved on tha blade of a Scimitar/
beefin was pointless, ‘n in so many ways it was Pitiful/
Got Tha East and The West Engaved in a Civil war/
But I stay Rippin ‘em, questin’ to be tha best at this shit/
Even IF Rap Reaches it’s Ultimate Death At Tha End/
That shit's Ready for Audip Fool, read more carefully