breakdown:

punches ak
flow ak
structure none of them were great...but cash's was better
personals ak
metas ak
multis ak
creativity ak
complexity neither
enjoyability both
overall ak

ak, even though you won, next time, try not to stretch some of ur linez so much...makes it much harder to read and a LOT less enjoyable.
cash, u got potential. work some on ur punches and flow and u be straight.
gee, i sure hope these mods don't disqualify THIS vote and say i'm d/r.

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