hmm...decent battle...
Mc Aines...u started off pretty good...but as the verse went u got weaker...the metal gear solid line had no thought behind it really...no wordplay or anything...rhymes were just decent....vocab was the best thing in ur verse...
Cashvilln...ok work on some small things....put more wordplay into ur shit...rhyme a little better...and maybe use some more vocab..and u'll be pretty fuckin good...u got a nice flow...a few good lines..I like ur closer "not gettin on ur nerves, I'm gettin on ur bone marrow"...use more lines like that...
vote-Cashvilln...u took this but not by a whole lot...decent verse tho..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1148442
^ needs votes...would be appreciated