sniper took this....
he had nice ass wordplay..altho his flow was kinda fucked up cuz of the stretched bars....I like the "manipulated" line...the wizard of oz line was pretty fuckin dope too...
outcome started good with rhymes..but his punches weren't really there...altho he had a few decent disses....but some of his lines were just blah....the opener was the best part of the verse, the rest went downhill...
both of u can elevate, Sniper, work on ya flow....and Outcome, work on punchlines...
vote-Sniper
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1148442
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