I liked D's rhyme scheme. Nice flow. It was a good verse. Jacent had a pretty ill verse. His rhyme scheme wasnt as ill as D's, but I loved his closer. Straight Ace came pretty decent too. He dropped my favorit part of the collaboration.
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Originally Posted by Straight Ace
Starin'... eyes turn watery...as
...grief dances on my lashes..
& if hate burns..watch me turn into embers & ashes..
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Pretty nice drop, altogether.
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