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Old 02-02-04, 12:21 AM   #6
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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At 1st I thought I was dealing with a Vet again
Until, I met this mother fucker Brethren
Like he's a member of an elite brotherhood
Lyrics killed him 6ft deep, just so his mother could
weak punches and an attemp at a personal
See em dead, done for good!
2nd he's 2 years under me, 2 years younger please
My lyrics are hollows then guns release
Feeding off dude's fear with a hunger to beef
He's done I put em under the street, in a slump slumbered to sleep
This youngster is WEAK!
still no real punches
His raps aren't raw he's just wishing it is
So go back to playing basketball in Michigan this is it
This bitch is thin.... and brittle
Bitch just quit you're insignificant and little
first punch...but weak
Now this is the riddle in the middle of the verse...
Caskets closed you'll get riddled in the church
And tell us how many times you're gonna get roasted
and come back in this place?
Burnt his ass is toasted... a direct smack in the face
you verse contained no creativity, jus simplistic stuff. Check out the Whackness Emergency Center for helpful battle tips.


You hard?! Fucking sun dials is the only way you did your time,
Watch this bitch fall apart, like I fucking slit your spine,
ok personal, lil played
Ha, with that bio, I sense a fake ass Philly act,
Interested in trees, hell, I'm battlin a dendrophiliac,
nice..good vocab
JamesJr. PM's me, "can you beat me please", I accept with open arms,
Leave this battle like cigarettes, close but no cigar,
haha nice meta
Rearrange your name, and get a 'mesaj' about this kid bruising himself,
Like this kid was battling himself in the mirror, you're losing yaself,
ok
You asking to die battling me, just stick an axe in your thigh,
You ain't an ass-pirate, then why you got a patch in ya eye?,
um..kinda whack
You shut the fuck up now, only refer to me as father or pops,
Girls be like, get your pause off me, like pick ups were comma's or stops,
weak punch and meta
While you sweatin, anticipating, like you measurin water in drops,
Ohio?! Alien abducted ass live on a farm, why don't you just offer them crops?,
Challenge Brethren, Now you ripped, head shoulder knees and toes,
Need to grow after I killed you, fuck 20 lines, I don't even need em yo,
kinda filler
JamesJUNIOR, Dick so small, this idiot gets brain through thongs,
When he says Grand Theft Auto, he just means playing a video game too long.
played

Ouch
dope lol

OK, Brethren rippe JamesJr. He had a more elevated verse with good punches, personals, and metas. Some filler in there. Now to me James' verse was like a vets filler, weak punches and nothing to exciting.

For the love of God please drop an honest vote here! It's been open for ever. Mad sleepage. Thanks guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110540