i'll do this one line by name
1st two lines
give to brethren. the whole sun dials and split spines was dope.
didn't like the open by james jr.

2nd two lines
brethren. i hope that dendrophiliac was someone scared of trees. if so give it to him. for this word usage alone. its like a big word score in scrabble.

3rd bar
goes to james jr. had to cut it off with the younger please/gun release. even though this wasn't great it was better than brethrens cause his didn't rhyme.

this gone take a while so i'll skip to close calls

4th bar
the best two bars so far
brethren did a great job with the rearrange name bruising himself. in a mirror fighting, he losing himself. loved that. very original. jamesjr. did a great one as well with the hunger to beef. slump slumbered to sleep. this kid is weak. but brethren gets this one.

5th
goes to brethren cause james jr repeated it is on both lines

after that brethrenjust went on with punches and personals and vocab. goes to brethren