This was pretty cool. Vis came decent with it. I wasnt feeling the rhyme scheme at the beggining but it turned out pretty good. Maven came nice with it as well. This was a nice read.

Fav lines from Vis:
Undefied levels will be patched.. and beat
demons & devil.. must work faster.. to achieve
happiness after.. stress will relieve..
Then we will share the laughter...

Fav line from Maven:
attempting to live quietly and die in the same way

^That was the illest line in the whole piece.

Nice work fellas.

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Ps. are you the same Vis from Lyrical War and RTM?...