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Old 02-02-04, 12:46 AM   #10
LyRiCaL GeEnUs
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ey yo dis cats scared to spit first so ima bring it to the table
we got a young amateur on our hands 14 right out the APOLLO stable
pretty weak
its cool tho to see a young gunna tryna get at dis thang
but once im done with ya boy that catll never be the same
ya battlin a girl
yo dawg you play football? well maybe you can understand
but don't me mad dat im da playa n you a bitch in the stands
once again, ^ sounds pre-written to me. Look at the name. None of these punches are effective dawg
u don't like me in this game cuz i play too rough?
ima make ya ass scream uncle n tell me dis is enough!
whack
how u gon compare us two? when he ain't even like me?
cuz dis kid is strate gator n yte grl is just nike
yte GIRL
what the fuck is yte grl? sounds like a gay crew name to me
u prolly aint even gangsta, u just a fuckin wannabe
come up talkin shit to dis kid n da MC
we got techs we got 9's thatll leave u sprawled out on the street
face down in the gutta, bullet whole in ya neck
n if u ain't sho what crew u fuckin wit! next time u betta check
Aight this was weak, no punches or personals landed cause you pre wrote this shit to battle a guy and didn't change it when it was a girl. Herb


half of his shit didnt hit cause ima chick/
im on the field ur a chessplayer tryin 2 get a chick/
yo get rid of the / after ya lines. Unnecessary. ok punch, but weak 2nd line
ur the 1 in the stand screamin my name/
sayin i wish i could b that girl i wish i had game/
ok, dun feed off his verse tho
ur lame u dont belong in the game u cant rhyme/
im not scared 2 go first it was ur callout not mine/
ok personal
yeah hes wearin gator air force 1 but they fake/
im wearin real gucci his gator aint real its paint/
played and weak
y r u allways sayin young gunnerz r they ur idols/
hes a bitch he cant take the pain he needs midol/
played
kid im the nose guard ur the equipment manager/
while im gettin the applause ur gettin laughter/
played...be creative
now ur reputation is shattered its broke/
against this white girl ur bound to choke/
ok...jus ok
face it u cant rap u dont belong in the game/
r u really hotbarz did y change ur name?/
weak


Yte Grl takes this. She had punches and personals that actually hit, mC couldn't grasp the concept that he was battlin a girl. Vote=yte grl

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