Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
aight...solid punch...7/10

Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
hmmm..didnt like this...worded bad...3/10

A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
ok..not too much..6/10

Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
not really a punch..pretty weak...3/10

With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
shoulda come much harder for the closer...3/10

overall ...for illtalic....22/50....44%



Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
coo punch....liked this...8/10

This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
weak...3/10

My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
played concept...average...5/10

Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
nice personal....8/10

Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
lmao!!....8/10

I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
like the wordplay....8/10..strong final lines...

overall for wicked...40/60...wicked wins....



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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109739
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wtf?? i cant do it by breakind down bars??.......thats weak..