not bad, some original wordplay, very unoriginal name,(bitten from lost boys) underrated had good vocab, wordplay was original, though it seemed a bit weak to me. Your flow was decent, had a few good multis, but a bit more work could have gone into your transitions.

Wise Ways, your flow was nice, wordplay was also original, but also a bit weak, vocab was nice. some of the lines were kinda corny, like the" Wise can jump out of a crevice, into quicksand, and get out in seconds." that was weak, it seemed to me that you could have had some killer lines, but you would screw em up sayin shit like.
"like a ghost, running across the suns surface on my tippie toes" the ghost thing just ruined that whole bar. but anyways, it was enjoyable enough to read, i actually finished it, so i guess i can't complain to much about it. Please don't take any of it to heart, just friendly criticism, no hate what so ever.
6/10, decent drop

p.s. you should let me get in on part 2 though, sounds like a fun topic, i always love to brag about my skills, so hit me up..