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Old 02-02-04, 01:29 AM   #5
M&rk
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multi had one good verse, but it wasnt a punch really, and the rest of his stuff was played out-"I’m new yet u had to test-me-first? U think I suck, jus check-my-verse
Your death is in these 10 lines, I don’t even need my tek-to-burst"
lyric good finisher, das wut got my vote, -clever- good vocab, but u ddint rhyme wit any of 'em, u rhymed wit da played ones, das only thang i care ta write u need ta work on
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