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Old 02-02-04, 01:54 AM   #14
Phoeniix
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lol^ for the structure?

i was wondering who RB.com's father was....i thought maybe an alias...but after reading...i guess not. none the less he still wins. Rosters shit was structureless, read some more text battles and you'll see what u need to do. hey u could of spit that off the dome in real life and it might of been good for freestyle, but this here isnt freestyle rapping off the top of your head so much. make it good with good concepts. RB Father takes it, not too hard to beat roster though. the water dam wordplay was kinda useless, but at least u came nice and structured, clear and punched.

vote: RB.com's Mommy
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