Why!!??...
Please tell me why God did this have to happen to me?
Lavishly a nation at our feet we were lacking to see
already starts off with good, true emotion..nice
& I was shagging a fleet, but horrible rumors infest
Truth be told...
...was a sudden pain in my chest, when they ingressed
nice use of internals, very good vocab
My actions depicted as evil and I regret my vengenance
Repentance? I put my conscience through death sentence
best line so far....let's see if you can top it
How foolish I was. . .to justify my actions through hate
Just as soon as he died . . . bitch forfilled her own fate
vivid imagery on this one...i can actually picture her
I rather been mistreated on instead of been cheated on
Beated on, self worth I feel it cursed of sons to be John
killin it with the multis again....
Led many to graves but praised he was so cunning & brave
I was a slave to my jealousy cuz he was the newest rage
Remembering the times...when "it was so hard to get her"
For worse or better...
..I never thought I would ever write a "dear john letter"
the last four lines of this verse was some of the truest shit i have ever read on RB...this piece was raw as fuck...seems like you poured your heart out into this one...i felt what you felt or the person you speak of felt...
don't even have to say this but nice job Emerge..not just cuz your my homie but b/c this piece is real, about real life and you captured it....peace.*Water turns deep red*

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