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Anti Drug=Pre-marital Sex
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IP:
i know how the actual song goes and i can see it flows nicely...you approached a pretty universal topic (females) kept it fairly simple and got your point across in a really good way....one of those pieces that a lot of heads on RB will read and be able to apply it into their own life....flows nicely, very creative way to approach the topic by incorporating zepplin's verses in with your own...another well written piece by you, need i say more?
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