m16....
ur name is of a gun
that constantly fucks up.
and that lines up greatly with how u rhyme
u r like a big horrible rhyme.
no punchlines
go read something in legends....
not to be mean but just try to elevate as much as possible.

vote- jae, he had constant punches
and structure flow was greater.
...i good grammer.

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We hang the petty thieves and appoint the great ones to public office
Aesop.