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illtalic
Read this fags posts from top to bottom.. start wiv the sig
he's immediately G.O.N.. so much for makin it big...
Hmm... not bad really... 6/10
Look at ur crew for a second.. the recruiters a Dazasta
a load of wack rejects lost in time.. an Banderas was just a starter...
haha... nice one... hit hard... 8/10
A 1 in ur name makes u top of the class? I'd clown u wiv sheets
now im leavin ur mouth on the floor.. so ur really the Voice of the Streets...
Hmm... wasnt feelin this line... 5/10
Ur an oddity.. not a genius.. but still a freak of nature
your life is as good as over.. the minute my pen meets the paper...
dope... 9/10
With 10-14 lines i'll take the minimum required.. an still leave u tired
skills are fired.. u shoulda followed ur instinct an gracefully retired.../
not a bad closer... 7/10
overall... 35/50... decent verse flow was off at one point but you got it back... structure was decent... good... keep it up... pz
W1CKED
Cant recognize illness, so u even come wack when your biting
And the only real comedy, is the fucking fact that your writing*
very nice opener there... good... 8/10
This ain’t a battle; it’s slaughter, cause this fuck lacks wisdom
I’ll bless him, and dump his corps in the water...like a baptism!
hmm... concept wasnt that good... a didnt like it neway... didnt really hit... 5/10
My raps split him, so I only have a prayer to offer his ken-folk
Before we battled,
I should have got on his level......by jumping out of my window!
maybe its the way that a pronounce 'folk'... but it dont sound like window... but the last line of this bar was decent... played... but decent... 6/10
Nigga, I use my spits as a gun and I’ll kill him with this weapon
I Upper-handed him some ill lines....But this bitch aint catching!...**
Hmm... played out gun lines... but t was a decent bar... decent personal... 7/10
Not starting your car, or Taking a shit....Nigga, Nothing’s safe!
He though he’d win, but reality hit.....& broke his fucking face!
flow was terrible in this bar... a didnt like it neway... lol... 5/10
I’ve made a living bussing 8s, & I’m just learning to use this art
A win is nothing...
So I’ve decided to up the stakes...& drive’em through his heart !
decent closer... 6/10
overall... 37/60... not a bad verse... had some good personals in there... keep it up... pz
v/ illtalic...
honestly thought he took this... on the points^... and as his verse was more consistant... ive broke it down and the points were about even... even thought an extra bar was dropped by W1CKED... pz
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