speek, liked the twist at the end, really finished up nicely.... thought the flow was knocked a bit by the syllables in places, but enjoyed the read.. wasnt expecting the end... ya scheme was decent aswell, and the execution, wording, made it easy to follow.... Diverse, a different approach to the topic, but just as good... again thought there was slighly too many syllables,.... liked the way both ended, one waking up the other going to sleep.... a good collab here, both verses went well together, and i liked the hook.... keep at em