I thought this was pretty nic. Nice flow from both. Nice descrition of feeling from both. It was an easy read. I just thought it was pretty nice, all together.
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Originally Posted by diverse
Tasting salty tears, chasing infinite pain away with bottomless beers
Swallowing my hurt and pride while owning up to my greatest fears
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^That was my fav part. It was ill. Keep up the good work fellas.
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