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Old 02-02-04, 08:25 AM   #1
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Erm....close battle....

TheUnderRated - you started off well but then it seemed as if you ran out of things to say and your verse went downhill. Your punches had a good concept but they were worded wrong and didnt hit hard enough. Nice attempt at wordplay though.

Technician - your verse wasnt as creative as UnderRated's but your punches hit harder and you had a few personals in there. Good flow but the structure needed fixin.

v/ Tech.......more simple but more effective verse

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