alright battle......both came sub par and shit.....

Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
original. ..7/10
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
ehh.... played 5/10
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
want feelin it 5/10
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
getting better...nice personal 8/10
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz
again a good personal ... 810
31 poitns
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Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
No...monk?..blah 5/10
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
decent 7/10
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
better .... 7/10 nice puersonal punch
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
much better 8/10 , witty
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
ehh....3/10 wasnt feeln it.....
30 points...........you lose....by a piont

decent .... but both came weak .... vote - LM.....more originality.....more wit.....better punches......Fiorz i hated your closer !......

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