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Old 02-02-04, 09:35 AM   #13
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Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
5/10.. cant get more average than that line when it comes to battles
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
7/10.. significantly better.. 2nd line watered down by first tho
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
4/10.. simple yes.. but in no way effective.. played
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
5/10.. another below par punch.. nothin new with regards concept
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
7/10.. compared to the rest not a bad way to finish

28/50

Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
6/10.. liked the first line.. nice concept.. ?? @ the second
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
5/10.. massively overplayed meta4s
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
6/10.. not hard hittin at all.. but original
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
4/10.. horrible.. need i say more?
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
7/10.. relatively nice closer.. original(ish) meta4

28/50

Lmao! Scores are tied.. cant go by closer.. so i'll go on my fave punch:

"I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career"
- LM

Let down by the first line.. cos the second wasnt bad at all.

"Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
- Fiorz

Opposite to LM.. nice first line but dodgy second.. tho it was still a tad stronger than LM's..

VoTe = Fiorz

Drop a vote on whichever one u can:

vs wogzta:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096

vs W1CKED:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

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