come on now... It wasn't wack... it was nothin special... but to call it wack and not give too much reasons for it... thas goin abit far.... lol...
it's ok, it was too short, the flow was cool, there wasn't that much wordplay or anything...stronger vocab could have helped, concept was aight, see you could have made it longer to get more into it, to elaborate and shit...
you say your new right? so just keep dropping more, and take want you can from criticism... -1-