this is a veru good example of when a newb takes on a vet.
4885 tried but he was battling like dude was in front of him. Lm attacked with the lyrics you expect to see in an online battle. he was original and used punches and personals.
4885 you will get better after you do a couple of more battles so you can see how they do it on here. my vote to lm.

vote one these
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111488

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111118

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132
vote on those