Ok..Well that was enjoyable.
First of Jea, dont put ur text in size 1 just to make it seem like ur shit aint stretched. slut.
But as far as the content goes.. nice.
Good use of words.
Some ok & good punches, nothing really oustanding but, Ok.

No real punches..
Some slightly funny lines, like the biggie line.
But apart from that.. just elevate.
Concentrate, focus on ur opponent more ..
& work on ur creativity.

vote M-Jae for better punches & a overall better verse, basically