Yeah, again... daff my advice is to read alot of the other battles on here. Your punches aren't personal, they aren't very good.. really no creativity.. i mean I don't know what else I can say. Just read other battles. Menolin, didn't have to do much.. but I was liking some of those lines.
Can you hit up this battle for me, been up about 10 days. Had 8 votes for me but only 4 are counting, I just need it over with so someone plz hit it up!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109424
vote- Menolin