thought this was pretty one sided, M-jai, ive seen better from you, but this was easily good enough to take it.... J, ya had some nice wordplay, and a good scheme to ya verse, although some lines were stretched... ya punches hit decent and were quite consistant... could have come harder tho in places... M sixteen... your punches need work, didnt really connect hard enough, and the scheme didnt really set them up well... work on them... and be more consistant, with ya bar length too.....
....vote=M-jae.... an all round better verse......