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Old 02-02-04, 02:19 PM   #3
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This was ok here i thought....like Dev said fix the structure up a bit.....you had some feeling in there i thought....had some ok multies towards the end and some in the begining of this...try using more threw out the piece though....vocab could be up'd though....but keep at it.
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