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Originally Posted by Solitude
I am a little nervous like webster when he shakin
a hollow man like kevin bacon
the world doesn''t see me i go so un-noticed
i'm hopeless that's why i wrote this
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I thought that part was the illest. It fell of a little after that. I think you just tried to say to much in too little lines. This piece has a lot of potenceal. Keep doing what you do.
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