good piece man, as was said good flow and all but i didn't like how you used the same word to rhyme with its self, such as :

I’d have chose to pray, but god just dumped me
&, then I notice a man sitting across from me

but other then that it was good man, i liked it. Just try and avoide the same word rhyming. Check my 2 drops if ya will.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111615

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111585