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Old 02-02-04, 03:11 PM   #18
KiLlEr EmCeE
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one-sided battle...an eazy win for brethen....he didnt have 2 try very hard...
james..ur flow waz ok...not thatttttt bad.....but work on that...and make ur punches stronger....add more excitment and vocabulary.....ok for a newb...keep elevating....
brethen- good shyt wit da flow....nice punches....n ok structure....nice vocab.....overall- ur verse waz good....not dat boring....
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punches: brethen- his came harder and were on the point.....(experience)
flow: .....brethen barely.....both gotta work on that....u gotta catch a rhythm....n stay on da topic
strucutre: brethen....he kept hiz verse neat....not all over the place...james- werk on that.......even out the linez....
vote: brethen....no hate ......no d/r.......1
keep elevating-james...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
^^return da favor......
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