this was good, i really liked this piece man. It was awsome... lots of emotion, actually tellin somethin, and you had good vocab and flow. Great piece man. If you could hit me up with some feedback for my 2 drops that'd be greatly appreciatd.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111585
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