Flow is very shakey, as you can see on the first 2 bars:

"I love you so much, theres a little i hate, since the day we met......i knew it was fate"

You had to pause at "met", to stay on beat, and im not talking about the normal pause between bars or what not. Thats the main problem in this, the delivery and slow needs work.

"cause i love you as much as i cannn"

see you rushed that bar in also.

Just tryin to point things out for you to work on.

.OnE HuNeD'.

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