i cant vote but your verses both need some pointers..

firts off both of u came with some played out bars..and tenz, shootin people lines are the weakest thngs u could drop..u guys need to add some vocab, punches(definatly), some sort of rhyme scheme(flow) and structure.
cuz ur verses were both pretty weak. u guys need to try and be more creative in fabricating orginal punches,etc..
i'm not tryin to diss u guys, just tryin 2 help u both improve..elevate