i aint gonna break it down.... my view is the same as most,,, i liked it... you stayed pretty consistant, tho the end was slightly better i thought... your scheme seemed quite smooth and the vocab was placed nicely... not too over used.... the topic was good.... see nthis sorta thing before, but most topics i have so.... but i thought you handled it well... and for a short piece ya got alot in it... yeah good drop....