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Flyweight
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IP:
This is just my opinion .....since I can't make it "official" vote
Mike's verse 's good points:
multis, good structure, flow decent voab:
Negative points: (work on these) just a suggestion
(punchlines , multis, wordplay, vocab, ) tune it up
Ironic your's is almost the opposite:
good points:
(flow, multis, decent meta, )
Iliked this line :
"Fuck ya Roots, even ifu got help from biggie ull never have this vet shook
and as for this bitch,he aint eva gettin signed like stevie wonders check book"
Tho the one before was kinda basic....
Negative points:
(structure, vocab, punchlines) tune em up
I see POTENTIAL in BOTH keep rapping , writing , freestyilng
I can't vote ......
(But if I could I'd have to say Drinx)
Mike should dealt a harder blow being he has more experience that's the final reason why in my mind after reading both and compare all above^^^
But AGAIN I CAN'T VOTE so
just looking out
JamesJr.
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